When we are writing emails some time we may not care much about small things.But it will create difficulties to recipient. As well as it reflects sender.This is a good post on it. It highlights necessity of the good writing.It mention simple example as follows;
Compare the following two job applications. The content of the emails are identical – but who would you give the job to?
i’ve attached my resume i would be grateful if you could read it and get back to me at your earliest convenience. i have all the experience you are looking for – i’ve worked in a customer-facing environment for three years, i am competent with ms office and i enjoy working as part of a team. thanks for your time
Or
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’ve attached my resume. I would be grateful if you could read it and get back to me at your earliest convenience. I have all the experience you are looking for:
* I’ve worked in a customer-facing environment for three years
* I am competent with MS office
* I enjoy working as part of a team
Thanks for your time.
Yours faithfully,
Joe Bloggs
So think twice before your writing
Compare the following two job applications. The content of the emails are identical – but who would you give the job to?
i’ve attached my resume i would be grateful if you could read it and get back to me at your earliest convenience. i have all the experience you are looking for – i’ve worked in a customer-facing environment for three years, i am competent with ms office and i enjoy working as part of a team. thanks for your time
Or
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’ve attached my resume. I would be grateful if you could read it and get back to me at your earliest convenience. I have all the experience you are looking for:
* I’ve worked in a customer-facing environment for three years
* I am competent with MS office
* I enjoy working as part of a team
Thanks for your time.
Yours faithfully,
Joe Bloggs
So think twice before your writing
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